COMPARİSON AND CONTRAST ESSAY
28.03.2014
LİFES OF PEOPLE İN OLD AGES
Life is changing
day by day. A new thing being found by someone over the world every day. Technology
is getting improve. Because people live more comfortable,they try to find a new
things.Maybe,while they are finding a technolocigal devices,they lose a many things such as cultures, sinceritiy.
They had little things but, they
were happier than now.They had got a lot of friends in old ages.They
knew that they share something each
other.They gradually lose these values.
Firstly, the standards of living was lower than now. People
didn’t have a lot of clothes. Briefly , they didn’t want to spend money for
clothes because, they thought that it was a waste of money. They earned
money under difficult conditions and preferred to spent
for meal. Moreover, children didn’t
have technological devices such as television, telephone, computer for passing
time. They played game in the street or in the garden. Furthermore,
everyone hadn’t their
own house. People had a larger families than now. Because they earned little
money, they spend this money
for more
food.
Secondly,
technology didn’t improve like today. They didn’t have many hospital, school. When
they were ill, they were
trying to heal themselves. Generally,
they used the plant to threat. Some of these treatment cure disease but, it
couldn’t cure some severe diseases. So, many people died in old ages because of
disease . Other hand , there was no technological devices so life is much
harder than now. They had
to do everything by human power because they didn’t have
another option. Although They had got
less thing, they were happier than now. Because,
knew how to be happy with less.
Thirtly, people were able to trust much more each other in old ages.
Neighborly relations were more advanced. For example, people
could give their keys up neighbors without
thinking. But, no one can do it nowadays. On the other hand, people, who lived
in old ages, had got much more close friends so they could share more with
each other. But, we can say easily that
new generation don’t know sharing because they can’t pass time with each
other. New generation prefer to stay at home, to play computer game.
Fourthly, we have an advanced technology so we can do more work, wearing less. We use technological devices such as telephones, computers in
every area of our lives. We can do our job easier with these devices. For example,
while we are sitting on my chair, we can do shopping thanks to net. Moreover, we
can speak with our families or friends face to face. But, while we are doing
this, we lose our social
environment and our friends. We can’t so friendly each
other like old people.
In
short, we can say easily that old people lived under hard conditions but they
were very happy and they knew the value of
all, which they had got. They were more intimate with each other and keen to culture. But, new generation only think about themselves and don’t want to share anything with each
other. They don’t know their cultures and traditions and don’t try to learn
them. I think that new generation never understand old people and to be like
them.
OUTLINE
Life is changing
day by day and people are changing.
1-Old ages.
a-Standarts of livivg were lower.
b-People had large families than now.
2-Tecnology of old ages.
a-Tecnology didnt improve like today.
b-But,they could be happier than now.
3-People were able to trust much more each other.
a-They could give their keys up neighbours.
b-They had got much more close friend.
4-But now,we have an advanced tecnology.
a-We can get what we want from the net.
b-We can do all Works over the net
con:we can’ teach old people’s life and we can’t be like
them.
LİFES OF PEOPLE İN OLD AGES, Although They had got less ---> Capitilization
YanıtlaSiltechnolocigal, sinceritiy, Thirtly ---> Spelling mistake
Some of these treatment --->singular - plural
Although They had got less thing, they were happier than now. Because, knew how to be happy with less.---> You should not use "because" like that.
1)LİFES* OF PEOPLE İN OLD AGES=> Sing-Plural (Lives)
YanıtlaSil2)they were happier than now. Because, knew how to be happy with less.
==> No sentences start with 'Because'. You can connect two sentences.
3)...other and keen to culture. But, new generation only... => To start the sentence with 'but' is not proper. You can connect two sentence with comma.