OUTLINE
AYŞE KUNDUZ
CONTRAST/COMPARİSİON
ESSAY
BEİNG
MARRİED OR BEİNG SİNGLE
Single –life and married life are different
from eachother.
1.0Firstly, Marriage
life requires responsibility
1.1 Parents
have to take care of their children
2.0 we can
not do everything,which did before we didnt get married.
2.1 Activity,which
we have,sometimes can not do after getting married.
Shortly ,Single –life and married life are
not the same
Differences of between
single life and married life
We can define that the marriage is to
combine two people's lives.İt means that laugh together and cry together.
The most important one is that
it means that too much responsibility.Single life is that you're freer and more
comfortable.Single –life and married life are different from eachother.Things,whıch
did when we were single, we can not do when we were married. We have more responsibility
when we get married.Nobody can go on their life
as previous life.
Firstly,
Marriage life requires responsibility
very much.While people are single they havent got much more responsibilities.For
examle,single people can go out any time
of day.But,after getting married,they should pass time their children and wife.Anymore,they
have a new life with their children and wife.They have to educate their
children.Moreover,they should know to share life.If they came across a
problem,they should be supportive to each other.After you got married,you had
to think your parter and your chıldren.Your family has some expectations and
you have to do them.
Secondly, single life is exactly the
opposite.We can not do everything,which did before we didnt get married.Single
person can stay out as late hours.But,we
can say that night life finish after getting married.For examle,single people
have many activities such as playing football,go to cinema.They can do this activities easily when they are
single.After getting married,these activities are done less or they can be
finished.Because,married people are busier than single people.But,sometimes,being
single is loneliness.For example,when we came to home,we can’t find anyone to
cheating.Furthermore,when you are sick,you dont have someone to take care of
you.Yo have to interested in yourself.
Shortly ,Single –life and married life
are not the same. We can understand that
everybody changed after getting
married.Because,they have to change. After
getting married we should pay more attention to our attitudes and behavior.It
is obvious that we have much more resbonsibility after getting married.
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